Chapter 1: Leti’s life before.
Leti had been born the son of a wealthy Irish clan leader in the 1980’s he his two younger brothers and a sister were there only children and had been well risen and taught, he was a very popular boy at school and was liked by all around him his best friends were two boys one named the George the other named Grong he liked them equally and they had many frolics but that year was one of the coldest in 100 years and it snowed all year around and there were very few occasions when they could meet.
And in this time he stayed indoors as did every sensible boy that had a mother and father that is if they were smart (“They” are the parents.).
So instead of the cool Sumer turning into the cold winter it went from cold to very cold a number of the houses in the village were altogether smashed down by the cold and very windy blizzards that set in late in the month of December but Leti’s father had said that after a great cold came a great warmth and also said that when the warmth came he would wish that it was gone.
But Leti hoped that the warmth would come soon because he was freezing every time he went out of the house to stretch his arms and legs with a short walk he would come back cold shivering and numb from the intense cold that was always bombarding anything or anyone that was out doors.
He only saw his friends in the warmest part of the cold day which was normally in the middle just before it starts to get cold and just after it has warmed up enough to go outside, then they only had time to talk for about a minute before George’s mother called him (She was very protective over him) and after that Grong always said “I should be getting back to his folks too” and Leti would go back to the house looking down at the cold white snow.
That winter he learned more about his history about his family and that his grandfather had been a leading general in a major war his own father did not know which war and his other grandfather had been a major in the same war.
His sister was taken sick one day and he was sent to get a doctor he did this but when he came back he found out that his toes had frozen and he had not even noticed and the proses of unthawing them was very painful.
The doctor that he had fetched helped in this quite a bit and almost got his own feet frozen but he had a sled sort of thing and hitched a ride with an ice boat that was going at about 50 miles an hour and the slay slowed him down only by 10 miles an hour this is still a magnificent mileage.
Their house door was in fact ripped right off of its hinges and replaced within the next hour and a good deal of things were loosed to the deadly blizzard.
Then after a while to him it seemed to be years the snow began to lessen and the heat was so great in February that he would go down to the river and bath every day and so did his family and many other family’s .
Those days were terrible that you would always wont to stay in the shad and many fires were fought a house right next door to their house was burnt to the ground and almost burnt their house to the ground too.
These days they were sent to do school and learn about things Leti liked these times but he grew tired of them in about a week, his father and mother would not let him go out and play with his friends like he used to do.
The long months passed so slowly that Leti did not even know when the cold would come again this time was not far off and it began to rain and then the snow came and the day that Leti wok up and saw the thin layer of snow on the ground outside was one of the happiest days of his life he was out running and playing with his younger brothers
[quote]The next chapter starts about a month later.[/quote]
Very extreme weather in Ireland, I see. I'm still noticing a lot of run on sentences, I see now it's because you're forgetting to put in commas and periods where they should be. Other than just quoting and showing you exactly where they need to be put, I don't really know how else to help you fix that, so I guess I'll do the first paragraph as an example or something. 
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