Jibber

Very well done. Perfect description of what a nightmare does to the mind. I can honestly say I remember nearly every nightmare I have ever had. I loved the rhythm ...

Wow! This is awesome! There were a few parts that I didn't understand such as, "That's the distortion." Mainly, I don't understand this because I'm not sure how a mirror ...

I REALLY like this story. I love the thought put into it and the idea that was portrayed. I didn't really like the format it was put in. It wasn't ...

Wow. That's awesome! All in all I couldn't find anything wrong with it. The rhyming is perfect, the rhythm is pretty good although in the first stanza when you use ...

I love the imagination and thought put into this story. However, I find it long and not many people will read something so incredibely long. Try breaking it up a ...

This was incredibly well written. It kept my full attention and there are few short stories that are able to do that. It did end a little abruptly and it ...

This was awesome!!!!!! I loved the rhyming and the rhythm and the beat and the feel. It was all perfectly timed and the format is amazing. I haven't read many ...

Wow. That was really well done. I thought the one line "curiosity killed the cat" a little cliche though. Despite that, I loved the comparison between the cat and the ...

It's a great poem, but it doesn't really get across what you intend it to. Since it was put under the romantic category, I can see what the poem means ...

I'm not really sure what the theme was in your poem. Sorry. It's a habit I have to look for themes. :) I didn't understand who the Misty Man was ...

I like it, but I know you've never read about assassins. But it's okay, I have!!! :) Red, as an assassin, seems too merciful. I know, that sounds awful, but ...

I really liked this poem. However, as I was reading it I didn't really know what you were comparing the candle to. After reading, I thought about it for a ...

I love this poem. It brings into perspective the harsh reality that sometimes parents in their own emotional pain and despair, deal with their anger the only way they know ...