JesusFreak900

Why are you so darn good?!?!? Every story I have read of yours has been marvelous and kept me wanting to read more! Your writing style is descriptive and eloquent ...

I found myself trying to decipher what message you were trying to convey. I thought your writing itself was interesting, but the minimalistic take you had on the message just ...

Why, indeed? It blows me away how people, myself included, can pass off things such as love, faith, and miracles and take them for granted or simply deny their existance ...

Ok.. First, your descriptions of the surroundings right off the bat were wonderful! Most stories just barge right into the plot without giving the mind any location to occupy. I ...

I love the way you relate strong and passionate emotions to beautiful and majestic forces of nature. Your writing style interests me. I've never read a poem formed the way ...

Very inspirational to those out there that may be dealing with difficult times. I myself do not cut or even pretend to understand the purpose of doing so, but your ...

This poem/ story gave me the hebee-jebees. It probably does not help that it is night out. First, I'm sure you realize the complete lack of punctuation in this story. ...

Well, for starters, I adore your username, flowercrossing. Anyhow, I can see from your poem that you are obviously trying to convey your emotion. Whether you are taking on the ...

Hi there! Firstly, thank you for the follow. Next, and most importantly, your poem. I love it because I feel like this fits me perfectly. I am always just content ...

That was gorgeous! I was at total peace just reading it! I felt the coziness of the library and just wanted to snuggle up next to a fire and read ...

The story and the way it was written seemed very tight and concrete, which made it very easy to read and understand. Not to mention that it was just a ...

Well done! I enjoyed that bunches! The only thing that bothered me a little bit was some punctuation issues. Other than that, the flow was great! Also, the way you ...

This was a genuinely beautiful poem! Great job! A few things though... Some grammatical tweaks are defintely needed ("and wish a upon stars"). Also some punctuation issues here and there. ...

Very true. I really enjoyed the poem itself, but I feel like it didn't really have a full handle on the true feeling of fear. That moment of panic that ...

That was insanely fantastic... I am seriously really impressed with this brief snippet of story you have here. The atmosphere that you created is so real and ominous. I liked ...