CRY

by Innergy

Published September 4, 2012

"A rainfall forms puddles of emotion within your iris,
whatever you may feel, your emerald eyes can't 
contain it, may it be released, drop by drop until
the pure rivers of the valley overflow,
A perfect storm ensues. "

"A cruel and demanding wind gusts through your
silky crimson hair, your dazzling passion has been
casted up into the air. Surely, there must be a hurricane
that must care." 

"I understand, red velvet flowers release their 
empathetic petals upon your soft and gentle face,
they wonder what may be wrong honey, they comfort
you as they float generously around your crystal lips, 
the pain continues to throb, but it will soon go away,
so may you continue to weep, willows of sorrow, even
though it isn't promised, there's always a tomorrow."


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JesusFreak900
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JesusFreak900 wrote a review Review · Sep 6, 2012

I love the way you relate strong and passionate emotions to beautiful and majestic forces of nature. Your writing style interests me. I've never read a poem formed the way you form yours. That is a good thing, however. Also, when you italicized particular words, it made me want to really dwell on that line's meaning.

Great job!

Innergy replied · Sep 7, 2012

Thank you :-)

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Bobbywalker
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Bobbywalker commented Comment · Sep 4, 2012

I'm on my mobile, so I can't review. Good thing you have become much better. Good job

Innergy replied · Sep 4, 2012

Thanks. Bobby :-)



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