Jericho

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I just caught this review as I was going offline, so. Questions! You know how I love them, aha. Unfortunately, Page does kind of become a side note in future ...

Thank you for your review! And I'm not perturbed at all at the length of time between reviews; as long as you read and enjoy it on your own time, ...

Ah, thank you for your review. To clarify, there is not and never was a dead body in the motel room. Seven (my main character) is speaking figuratively when she ...

You'll see how deeply it affects Seven in future parts, trust me, haha. Seven has been around death all her life, so this part is focused more on the shock ...

Thank you very much again! Honestly, killing Page is one of those things I've never wanted to do particularly, but it's essential to Seven's character growth. (We salute thee, Page.) ...

Thanks again! I'm glad that the plot is starting to unfold like I wanted it to - I was a little worried that people would find it too boring. As ...

Thank you for your review! No lateness is unforgivable; it did take me over a month to start posting chapter 2, didn't it? I'm glad you enjoyed!

Hello! Thank you very much for the review. That didn't really happen to me here, and although that's not quite necessary, that could be a better effect to enforce; to ...

Ah, thank you for the review! I'm sorry I didn't see or respond to this earlier. First motion to address: Page's exact state of existence is addressed in chapter two. ...

Many thanks for your review! I believe I already clarified the 'cop' aspect with you in another place; however, as far as Angels go, this also relies on a bit ...

Thank you very much for your review!

If this is the quality of the feedback you intend to give to me and others, please do not review my work again.

Aha, more questions! I do love answering these, you know, and it gives me a good idea of what to look out for when I do eventually go back and ...

Ah, thank you for your review! It's really good to know that people have questions and are willing to read on. The next section is up, obviously, and has a ...