Jennya

Nice, it's a bit long though making it a little hard to read. Try creating stanzas and neatening everything up. The start is very nice but it get's messy after ...

I'm trying to figure out what this is about but the answer alludes me, maybe because I am tired. I quite like this poem, I like that shape and the ...

I loved this. It was quite hard to wrap my head around though. Maybe try stanza's to make reading easier. Since i've never come across anything like this before it's ...

Hey, I'm not American so personally I wasn't really offended by this poem. This is a poem not an essay no back up is needed, poems are here to express ...

I am not Egyptian but I have been following the story on the news. It's good that your getting your feeling out. :) Personally i don't believe that he is ...

farther into her sheets knowing the answer. Maybe try further. Anyway, I love your style very whimsical and innocent. But for some reason this doesn't settle well with me mainly ...

Nice. You tell the story quite well. Personally I think your punctuation is fine but then again I'm no expert. My shoes sink in mud in the mud? Maybe that ...

Nice and fun to read. It made me laugh. You have nicely achieved a good beat and rhythm. Personally I don't find your poem hard to understand but I do ...

Wonderful poem. i only just understand your poem but I have the feeling that is the effect you wanted to give . I love how the poem seems to drag ...

I love this. It gets you right into the mood straight away and pulls you right into the story. I also love the perspective, it rakes real skill to pull ...

This was cute and quirky. Personally this poem to me doesn't mean much but it's just weird,funny and a little random. Great job, i believe you have done everything you ...

I agree with the above reviewer, Tinkem. It looks better, more like a proper poem and is easier to read. I don't have much to say but I'm going to ...

I quite liked it. I really understood what you where trying to put across because I feel like that a lot of the time. Although i do think you should ...

I'm not an expert on essays but i will try to say something useful. 1. Make your paragraphs and structure clearer. I'm sure this is not your fault just because ...

Hey, i quite liked this. It was true to the original, I like how Romeo dies before Juliet awakes. I like your style but it's a bit plain to me ...