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This is a pretty sad poem. Nevertheless I liked it (which is unusual. I tend to avoid sad poems, but this was too good!) The rhyming scheme is very good, ...

La dee dum... intro, intro, intro... ERIC!! WHO'S THIS ERIC GUY? TELL US MORE! AWW MAN IT'S OVER Cliffhangers always tear me up :'( *sigh* ah well... guess I'll just ...

Wow, this poem I great!! I can't wait to kick it out of the green room and unleash it upon the world. I haven't seen that many poems (compared to ...

Not keeping in mind that this is part of a longer novel, I would totally have assumed that this was a dream! A lot of my dreams are like this; ...

That was beautiful! Hahah, if I was a parent, I guess I'd have to admit I'd do that. True, not to that extent, but everyone wants to know that someone ...

After reading this I'm kind of torn. The emotions conveyed by this piece are very beautiful, if a little sad. I have met thousands of people who know that one ...

Watchdog1324 here for the review! First off, welcome to YWS! Glad you came, and hope you'll stay :) Second, your spelling is almost flawless; only one spelling mistake. About three ...

When I first saw your work my gut reaction was "yay bears!" Then, once I started reading, I realized that there were no physical bears. Boo. Well, enough of my ...

I saw this a while ago, and thought "this is really long, I'm never going to read this." Let me apologize for that right now : THIS IS SO FREAKING ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society! Glad to have you here! After reading this, my first thought was "Wow... this is going to be a great book!!!" Just reading this prologue ...

I loved this poem. Not only for being unique(in that, I'VE never read one like this), but also in being a solid piece of literature. I totally get the feelings ...

I feel kind of bad writing a review on this when the only other person who's reviewed it has been my brother.... ah well. I love this poem- I have ...

I really liked this poem! Although you may have gotten harsh criticism for this poem, I do not think they truly took the time to understand this piece. I viewed ...

Not sure how to review this :P Is this an original work? I feel I've seen it before.. No part of this writing may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in ...

This was a very interesting story. I've never thought about the fact that people getting kidnapped from any other country than Africa happened to any degree. As a story, it ...