JaneThermopolis

I really enjoyed this poem. In fact my favorite lines were the first five: I just want to be friends... What we had, some might say it was special, but ...

That was very very very hilarious. I have some extremely obsessed Twilight fan friends that would probably act like this if they got within a mile of Rob Pattinson or ...

I also agree with the others, I personally think that this is a great short poem. The only thing you might want to change is that the second word in ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It's has a good ryhme scheme and it almost sounds like it would be a good chorus for a soft rock song. I liked the ...

Pretty good, but I have a few nitpicks. "I may not feeling as you feel for me,this sonnet is beautiful as you are to me." ?????? I may not feeling? ...

I actually really liked this poem, except I have one small suggestion. "I wither. I'm torn." Maybe you should put a comma between wither and I'm like: "I wither, I'm ...

This was a pretty interesting story, it kept my attention for a very long time, and I was curious to see what Smith was going to do. You have a ...

I really like this piece, especially how you compared bullies to pack animals. Bullying is one of the worst things that goes on in high schools across the country, and ...

I loved that instead of thinking in a human's perspective, you thought of what the letter would think (if it actually had thoughts.) Forestqueen basically pointed out all the nitpiks ...

You really have two ideas coninciding with one doesn't make the best of sense. The reader just ends up being confused. At least maybe keep the writer interested while still ...

I actually really liked this. I see what your getting too...and I wish I could relive those times too...when we didn't have to worry about much, because we were little ...

I also agree with what Story Weaver said: The more drama in a haiku, the better!!! However, I applaud you for writing a haiku!! (They're my favorite form of poetry). ...

Interesting poem. The title of the poem definitely suits the poem, because the start of every stanza was "romance is....." It actually is a pretty good poem, but I found ...

I also don't really like the title of this poem at all, but the poem, in fact, was excellent. It had excellent flow and it easily described so many complex ...

I thought this was a really cool story...although there was something about it that really didn't make me like it as much as I thought I would. For some reason, ...