Jalmoc

Hi there! I'm Jalmoc, and your story caught my eye! Honestly, I thought it was pretty good for being a first time fiction story! You left the ending where anything ...

I enjoyed this story, but I felt like it was really rushed. You didn't really describe what the main character looked like. From what you've told us I envision a ...

Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best ...

Hi again. Lol. Another one huh? This one isn't about questions but about how you can't do things... I think a good title would be Uncontrollable :) But once again ...

Hi there! :) I'm glad I'm the first one to read this! :D I think that a lot of people think these same exact questions in their head about everyday, ...

This was short, but it still got it's point across. :) I love your comparison to a Phoenix, it fits it perfectly. (at least in my opinion. :) ) There's ...

Wow. That was really powerful... I loved this story and how well written it was from one scene to the next. I thought this was going to be another one ...

Wow... I really hope this isn't from personal experience. But anyways, I thought it was pretty well written overall. You kept my attention through the whole thing. :) (not an ...

I enjoyed this story. One of my questions were, who were they at war with? If you said who they were at war with, then it wasn't very defined in ...

I really enjoyed this poem. :) It's true that only people who have experienced that truly know the pain of being alone. You really brought that to light in your ...

I absolutely love this. :D I have seen this happen in a lot of my friends' lives. It sucks for the person at the door, but the other person gets ...

This was a really good piece, at least I thought so. ;) Well, I'm horrible at reviewing, so I'm just going to comment. :D In the beginning, I love how ...

I love the emotion that you put into this. :) I feel like I can really connect with the character. Feeling that way isn't the greatest feeling in the world, ...

When I read this, I felt like I was reading a horror/mystery. Very nice! :D Well, it seems everyone else got most of the problems, so I'm just going to ...

I really loved this!! I know exactly how that feels, and it really rough to get through. I can't really see anything wrong with this piece, so I don't think ...