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Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best reviewer haha.) I like how you compare your feelings to molten lava, kinda spices things up.
I just hope that you can get happier feelings into your writing.
I think that Forever Here but Forever Gone might be good for a title? But it's up to you.
Well Keep On Writing!!!
--Jalmoc
Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best reviewer haha.) I like how you compare your feelings to molten lava, kinda spices things up.
I just hope that you can get happier feelings into your writing.
I think that Forever Here but Forever Gone might be good for a title? But it's up to you.
Well Keep On Writing!!!
--Jalmoc