Published September 30, 2011
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Hey AlyKat!
I really only have a few suggestions. I don't really feel like you have a whole poem here. Maybe an outline for one... Alright you need to try to answer your own questions. Or explain why you have these questions! Why are you even wondering about love first off? I would defiantly say add more! Also who is 'you'.
Please, PM me or post on my wall if you have any questions or need help!
-Boo
Hi there!
I've read other poems that you've written and I must say that even though a lot are short, they are excellent! This one especially, I could relate to- I know that the sort of questions you've asked in this poem are asked by people on a regular basis (myself definitely included) and you've done a superb job of putting it all into words and into such a short poem! Once again, I am wowed by how much you can put into a small space!
-This line is my favourite, because I've been struggling with the question for so long, and I love how you've added this!
As for a title, I think that Jalmoc has a fitting suggestion! That's my opinion.
Anyway, thanks for a great read, and happy writing
-Briggsy
Hi there!
I'm glad I'm the first one to read this! 
I think that a lot of people think these same exact questions in their head about everyday, but sometimes we can't see the answers until it is the right time. I think a good Title of the poem would be Questioning, but that's just me. Lol.
I hope that you feel better and that you answer your questions so you can feel better!! Well...
I'm not really good at reviewing, but from what I could tell I didn't see anything wrong.
Keep On Writing!!!
--Jalmoc