Published September 30, 2011
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Its good i liked it keep writing:)
This is interesting. It is kind of short, though, so there's not really a lot for me to critique. Anyway, I like the way you list off things that you cannot do, to emphasize the fact that you can't tell the person how you feel. Anyway, there's really not much to say, so good job! I'm sorry I don't really have anything helpful to say, also I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, either. Anyway, I usually don't really like rhyming poems, because they sound too forced, but this one didn't seem to have that problem.
And, I'm not really a very creative person, so I'm sorry I can't really help with the name. I have issues coming up with names for my stories as well. Anyway, great work
~Tayla
Hi again. Lol. Another one huh? This one isn't about questions but about how you can't do things... I think a good title would be Uncontrollable
But once again that is just me. 
I wish I could get those more often. Lol. Well if you have any questions just feel free to PM me or something.
I don't see anything wrong with the writing so A+!
Keep On Writing!!!
--Jalmoc