JaceClayton

Hi, Sporks! Thank you for reviewing this chapter. I really value the opinion of everyone on this site and am extremely glad when people decide to view my work. Yeah, ...

Thank you all for your advice and reviews! I appreciate it more than you know. I really need to get better at "setting up a surrounding" as I've been told, ...

Haha, I only described the gemstones that are worth mentioning, meaning the ones that actually are going to be relevant. However, I might take you up on the advice and ...

Thank you so much for your interest, Quasi! And you're the first person to like my choppy style haha. I tend to use it a lot. I don't know why, ...

Thank both of you for commenting! Snoink, yes, I do realize there is an over-emphasis on gemstone based coloring. However, this is for a specific reason which should become apparent ...

Gor.Ge.Ous! I loved it. Beautiful imagery and nice flow.

Thank you to everyone for reviewing this piece. It was a dedication to someone whom I recently lost, and I'm very glad it was commented on. Thanks again.

This was such a powerful piece. Now is when I wish there was a love button. So I'mma make one *creates a bangin love button, then clicks it several times*

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment. This was very emotional poem to write and it means a lot that you thought so highly of it. Thank you.

Enh, I don't think it really needs any work. You know I love it so :]

Thanks DayDreams! I really do appreciate it :] And snoopysoap, Grr those typos haha. But I'll get on them. Thanks again :] And the second chapter should be up fairly ...

Thanks :]]]

Thanks you everyone for giving me advice and praising my work. I really appreciate it!

AMAZING! I usually don't like rhyming poetry, but I ADORED this :]]] Post more material like this!

Oh my god. That was AMAZING. Seriously. The structure and diction just blew my mind. And my mind loved it.