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I can see you're fairly new to this, and I don't mean you to take offense at that; simply that everyone has to start somewhere and you've been lucky enough ...

I like it. I really love the look of this poem with its little stanzas and simple yet effective 'message' to the audience. Though some of the lines don't make ...

I'm sorry but, perhaps due to my current tired state, I fail to see any worthwhile meaning behind these words. It sounds as though you're trying to be very cryptic ...

Firstly, I'd like to say I liked your rhyming scheme, although it seems to have been redeemed in places where it would be considered too obscene to be seen. Also, ...

*poof* I have arrived! [quote] I found myself stretched and pressed to sidewalk pavements like flowers or nerves cracked between paper pages And I’ve told myself (again and again) that ...

@LittleMiss I believe, although I may be mistaken, that the prefix of 'cata' means down. Not sure whether it's latin or greek. For example, Catacomb, Catastrophe, Cataclysmic. Although it certainly ...

Oh! My! God!" I yelled so loud, my voice was probably heard in the thermosphere. But there was certainly no motive to care a cell about it at the time. ...

First of all, I'll say I really like the rhyming scheme. It's intelligently done, and surprisingly, without any real problems. (As is the case with the majority of rhyming poems). ...

I liked this, you really managed to sum up what I think most teens dread to think about, yet find their minds dangerously wandering into the void that is the ...

It was so cold that it slowly began to awaken me from my unconsciousness. I really don't like this sentence. I don't know why, and it's just my opinion. It ...

As I don't know the rhythm of the song, at times it felt a little awkward. However, I'm confident that if given whatever music you used whilst writing this it'd ...

The darkness I reject through my unrelenting will to prevent the evil barging into my life. The soul that drives me to go on weakens, as of exposed to the ...

I liked this, a truly simplistic and beautiful poem. It actually meant something to me, which is rare, and I feel like it's a warning to people who don't take ...

What more can I ask from you? when you've given me the last poison, that shall eternally remain. Slight typo. Just pointing it out. (I also think that What more ...

I didn't really like this, it sounded like you were trying a little too hard to leave a resonant message. But nothing for me, I'm afraid. As the other reviewer ...