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Ivywater

Sorry! I was just swearing on my dreams to the sun, the skies and the sea!! Please wait till I'm done!

  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: My Book

    Hello, Ivywater here for a review. This is an amazing poem, one I can really relate to. I love how simple it feels (at least to me), and your use ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life

    Hello! Let me just say this is beautiful! The subject is very interesting and definitely caught my attention. I'm not exactly awesome with poetry...but i'll try to review to the ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: It Was Said Casually! [REVISED]

    0.0 Wow....I'll say this, it's not the humor I was expecting, yet still funny. I hope this is going to count as a review, but I really can't find anything ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Blank Sheet

    Hey NympheaLily! Let me start by saying this was awesome. The imagery you used was amazing and really helped me picture the character and places well. I'm assuming it's a ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden Fate

    Hey, Ivy here for a review! Alright..first of all this was an amazing poem, one i can relate to. I haven't much to change so this is going to be ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: exiled.

    Hello Ivy here for a review! I'll start with simply saying this is a purely beautiful....a work of art. This is probably going to be another short review because I ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: She

    Hello Ivy here for a review, again probably going to be short since I'm not skilled in poetry and can't find much to change. First of all...I don't know if ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Memories

    Hello, Ivy here for a review, but I couldn't find anything to change so it might be short. May I start by stating this was a wonderfully inspiring poem. It ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, Narrative Re: In Another God’s Land

    Hello Lightsong, Ivy here for a review. First of all this was an amazing poem, and seeing how I'm not all that skilled in writing poems and I couldn't find ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Wolf QUeen

    Hi, Ivy here for a review! First of all this is a great story, it seems so hard to get a hold of a good fantasy especially for someone like ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Want Roses At My Funeral

    Already first of all...wow that was intense and extremely sad. You captured the essence(i guess...) of well...death perfectly. This is the best poem I've read so far, it really made ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forget to Receive

    (Wow...first review...) Hi BEWriter, that was incredible, much better than i could have done. I can't wait for the next part(if there is one). However i can point out some ...

    Jan 6, 2016


Keep your face always toward the sunshine - and the shadows will fall beyond you.
— Walt Whitman