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Re: My Love...
Before getting into my review got to ask did you use digital art or water color? It's driving me crazy trying to figure it out. ;-; Colors are snazzy and ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: They Are Not Us: A 17th Century American Southerner Defense of Slavery
It is interesting that you decided to go with the south's perspective instead of the usual slave's point of view. In fact, I think it was pretty brave of you ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: Sweet Little Phoenix
Hello there Vampire Lord! Ivory here for a review. Like others before me have said you didn't really establish who the little phoenix is. A child? Friend? You know what ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: the circular wall
Great poem! First off,the good stuff. Repeating words is a poetic device that can make or break your poem. If used correctly it can give your poem more of an ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 8/28/16
Hi there I’m back,sorry I haven’t been on much. Started 8th grade and honors class. ….and journalism. Oh well review time. Now I’ve never heard of Welcome to Nightvale,please tell ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: the bagel
Shame on @saentiel. Bagels are precious,especially with cream cheese. I just noticed that I don’t know if you even like cheese,or if you’re allergic. Oh well,bagels are amazing no matter ...
Aug 15, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 8/6/17
Oh my god! I have a very large family,so new cousins are discovered everyday. Although my parents are only children, my grandparents had lots of siblings. (Grandma had about seven) ...
Aug 7, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 7/30/17
So my survey answer was e a piano playing a high G flat. I thought the main story was interesting enough to be its own series. In fact, when clicking ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: Fonts Have Stories Too
IvoryRose is back again on another review spree. Probably, due to my utter lack of motivation to write. *yay* It was a very humorous short story, although I would put ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: Does Clickbait Work on Poetry?
Sheyren I hope you know that I love your humor poems and you even inspired my writer’s block poem. However,I need more points. So, you know what that means…… REVIEW ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: the perfect student
Very relatable poem! In school everyone is pressured whether it’s socially or academic wise. Luckily, we eventually finish, but sometimes it feels like it is never ending. I feel like ...
Aug 3, 2017 -
Re: Death
Love the poem! You really captured the feeling of grief and mourning. Sorry, if I’m asking too much, but did someone close to you die? If so I would like ...
Aug 3, 2017 -
Re: the past
Hi there friend, I completely agree with the message this story conveys. It is relatable and truthful. Since the beginning of time the new generation sucks the past one was ...
Jul 31, 2017 -
Re: Eyelash
Oh my god! I have naturally long lashes (no joke). It hurts so much to remove. I usually throw handfuls of water into my eyeball to get it out. Then ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: I would frown
Very deep story and I can understand where you are coming from, especially since I went through something similar. I was a little confused though, did you not say this ...
Jul 30, 2017
