IvoryRose

I'm not sure if I should have written this in Spanish. Oh well English was the language I started typing in so yeah. Great job describing her physical beauty, but ...

Hey Snowmonkey IvoryRose here for a review. I love the religious ties to the poem. I’ve been working on a story in which the main character is fearing judgement day ...

Hi it’s IvoryRose returning the favor with a review. I interpreted the poem as a man that committed murder and was now lost in a desert. He’s dying in the ...

Hello! First off the title you gave the essay is very powerful. Eating disorders can can people to see a distorted version of themselves, much like Picasso’s art. It shows ...

Hello IvoryRose again for a review! I see you and your sister do not always see eye to eye. Anyways this was the way I saw your poem. *ahem* The ...

Hello IvoryRose here for a review. First off the positive things. It's good that you provided both points of view. You understand both points of view and the reason why ...

Interesting story so far. It's good how you are giving time for the story to develop, but keep pacing in mind. At first the story was going very fast, then ...

Hey there IvoryRose here for a review! I think the piece was really sweet because friendship is really valuable. Even having one good friend is enough to bring joy. Usually ...

Hello IvoryRose here for a review! First off great use of pauses. They give a more dramatic and sad feeling. The reader can see the narrator’s emotions, through constant pauses. ...

You have a good color scheme and that’s very important. Colors can make or break a piece and you made sure they complimented each other. The strokes were more or ...

Yay for once I'm not super late when I come to review something! I like that you let the readers come up with their own idea of the poem's meaning. ...

So I might give a long review because I need points, so yeah sorry in advance. First off I thought it was pretty creative of you to use Haikus. If ...

Woop woop I returned and I will probably review all three chapters. First off I love the first paragraph. You described sounds and the chase well. It really painted a ...

First of all nice story! I also a dog lover (I live with four). On one of your sentences you forgot to capitalize the first letter of the word. It’s ...

So far seems like a good series. I can imagine it as a cartoon,wouldn't that be funny. It's kinda ironic considering the fact that one of my OCs is named ...