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Hello, this is Ace101 here to step in and do a hopefully helpful review! So Lael, I think you did really good with this poem, I could understand everything and ...

hello, Ace101 here to write a hopefully helpful review! So first I shale start with the bad parts, so here it goes. I am sorry to say this but... You ...

Hello :) Ace101 here to do a hopefully helpful review! so first I am going to start with the faults :) so the biggest thing I think, is that some ...

Hello! My name is Ace101 and I am here to write you a hopefully helpful review!!! :D so I liked that you put how much you miss the person into ...

Hello Nutty, great work on your poem! This is Ace101 here to write a hopefully helpful review! So first, I really liked how you said, "Love is not like a ...

WOW! this was a really RALLY good poem! Hi their this is @Ace101 to review your work :) like I said this was an amazing poem I enjoyed reading it ...

um, eh, hum, eehh, okay I think tis was interesting, sorry I just don't really no what this was about, but I did like it, even though I did not ...

hello! @PrincessInk Ace101 here to do a review on Love Lies Bleeding, so first off I liked this poem, I just don't understand one thing, "Fresh sweet smelling" and how ...

hi! MagicAce hear to do a review :) So I think you did pretty good, I could only find a few problems so I'm just ganna go ahead and tell ...

Hello! my name is MagicAce and I like to review as I read so lets see how this goes :) First thing I saw was in the beginning "This is ...

wow! that was pretty great! to me the beginning is everything and it really tells you a lot about just, how the story will go, and I loved your beginning, ...

Hello their! MagicAce here ready to review your work! first things first, lets start with the negative things, um, their is nothing in that department I don't think :) I ...

hi their! I really really REALLY! liked this poem, it was so beautiful and I loved the truth behind it, you did an amazing job and I honestly could not ...

Hello their, this is MagicAce, how are you today? So first I will start with the negative stuff, your biggest problem was grammar, I spotted like three or four witch ...

Hi, I liked your title and it's blandness, I liked your jokes haha, they were awesome and I am short on time soni will have to go soon but anyways. ...