Inspiredravens

Congratulations on the feature, this deserved it!

Nice poem, congrats on feature! I love how I somewhat got confused as the heart is confused, lost as the heart is. I love it. Great job, keep it up!

Congrats on feature! I love this poem, nothing I can say except keep it up, its awesome.

Love it- short and sweet

Awesome! Well, let me know when the following chapters are out and I will definitely review them:)

This is perfect and there is nothing that I can nit pick or suggest except that you keep writing- this is perfect and the mood is carried perfectly throughout. The ...

I understand, I will certainly revise that. Thanks for the review!

Just write as much as you possibly can in a brain dump and then sew it together and delete what you don't want, but you have to write it and ...

Thanks!

Hi there! Wonderful poetry you have there, I can clearly see the image and everything. Now, I don't usually do much on poetry because it is so free flowing and ...

Thanks for the review! And yeah, commas are the struggle bus for me right now, I used to go crazy with them, but I also think that your idea of ...

Thanks!

Ooh, thanks for pointing that out, I forgot about that... Oops. But thanks for the review!

Yes, yes, I know, her stupidity is going to be deleted and rewritten. I've already replanned and everything, I just haven't had the time to revise it. I've also been ...

Thanks for the review, I copied this in from good drive and when I did all of the italics for thoughts and some of the spaces got messed up, but ...