Insomnia

This was a really short Chapter, and I didn't find anything wrong. But I just have to say: Not every day freezing cold blue liquid pours out of your seat. ...

I laughed pretty hard at the end of this. You can probably guess where. ;) That was a good one. xD I stood so quick my head felt dizzy from ...

and that would that. *That would be that? Guess this is goodbye then Jamiy.” *then, Jamiy I'd have to agree with JC. Stupid lawyers in general. Apart from Tammy out ...

Hey, and staright off, wow! This was another twist! Mom had flied a court hearing to get me back. *filed “Look, its not that I want to Jamiy. *it's I ...

Hey Meevs (I keep thinking I'm spelling that wrong, most other people seem to spell it Meeves ;)). You just had to bring Becca back in, didn't you? I really ...

I actually feel happy that Jamie developed real feelings. I don't really know what he might have done if he didn't have Chris. Although I am still a bit suspicious ...

Hey Meevs. This was a really good chapter. :) The dialogue seemed natural in its awkwardness, if that makes any sense at all lol! And I only caught a couple ...

Actually, i really liked the way you described the woman at the start. Does seem to reflect on all other Americans though. Look out for some people annoyed with that ...

Hey Meevs. :D It says that you won't be posting anymore, but I just seen 32 so I'll assume that didn't work out. ;) I think this one's been pointed ...

Hey Snoink. :) Just came to read this, and it ended up being totally different than I would have guessed. xD “Here I am,” she said, her voice treble. Do ...

Hey Snoink! :) This is the first thing I've read of yours, but I think after this I might go look for some more! Although I have heard a lot ...

xD We already know how this is going to start, so hey. -starts reading lol- I think its natural *it's Sappy claps he hands excitedly her hands? its that relief ...

Hey Meevs. This is getting better and better. :) I want to see Chris in jail now lol. Just a couple of small tihngs... he didn’t hold me down by ...

Hey Meevs. One thing here, did you stick to the same tense? I'm not really sure. I was a bit confused lol. Its hot out, its strange how over the ...

Hey, Meevs. :) I finally worked out all the Chapter numbers, so after this i'll be onto 15... I think lol. I only found a few things in here. “Sure ...