Published May 16, 2007
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This was a really short Chapter, and I didn't find anything wrong. But I just have to say:
Not every day freezing cold blue liquid pours out of your seat.
Couldn't have put it better myself. I'd have probably put it the exact same way lol!
And JC, remember that even if a computer could type down the ideas, it could never have the emotional investment that Meevs has, so it'd probably come out all stale. I'm happy waiting... not that I have to yet!
Anyway, I'd say that i'm rambling too, so i'm gonna head to the next part.
Whoever invented time was an idiot.
Too true. Too true. hehe
Despite the shortness (and the fact that I read it after 25 *blushes*) I STILL LOVE IT!!!!
Wouldn't it be awesome if computers could type down all the ideas and everything, books would be written in like three minutes...but then again, where's the fun in that. Well...I would have a long supply of Ice Cubes, so it would be amazing.
Okay, I'm officially rambling...I'll see you at the next Ice Cubes. hehe .
-JC