Published April 15, 2007
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xD We already know how this is going to start, so hey. -starts reading lol-
I think its natural
*it's
Sappy claps he hands excitedly
her hands?
its that relief that we will get into a fifteen film,
*it's
But I cant very well do that,
*can't
I think the main problem on here is just typing too fst and forgetting your apostrophes.
I liked this pices as well. All your pieces are amazing. It seems that Jamiy is gay probably because of Chris. However, he seems to like Sappy. Either as a friend or maybe something more.
All finished with my editing now
And handed in all of this so far to my teacher for my portfolio *gets nervous*. Thanks for reading this and helping me out with this 
And I'm going to continue it right now yay!
Oh and the numbers are all sorted and it order!
Meevs
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"I only call her Sappy," and "Only I call her Sappy," have two different meaning. See it?
You're
let's go cinema? Let's go to the the cinema makes more sense.
-JC
Lol, I like the fact that this boyfriend might be gay...is it something Sappy is prone to?
I also like the jealousy...very realistic.
Keep going Meeves!!
Alainna
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