Published April 12, 2007
Taken down due to publishing
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Hey Meevs. This is getting better and better.
I want to see Chris in jail now lol. Just a couple of small tihngs...
I think I'll just go to the next part now. I need to find what happens to Chris lol.
he didn’t hold me down by my wrists and whisperer harsh words into my ear.
*whisper?
“So, your not going to be good.”
*you're
He wont like that you have been smoking.”
*won't
He defiantly wont like that you have been fucking
*definately
**won't
And... that's all.
I said in my last response, that it seemed like Chris had disappeared. Scrathc that. I liked how this piece was written. Jamit is very pesismistic and i can understand why. He aslo seems like he has a very high IQ. I am really liking how this is coming out.
Oops i didnt mean for it to be in italics, its fixed now
, should be a . you got it right in all the others, 'cept this one.
This made me smile =D and laugh
Whether the weather is good, and whether the weather is bad...
-JC