Published April 24, 2007
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I actually feel happy that Jamie developed real feelings. I don't really know what he might have done if he didn't have Chris. Although I am still a bit suspicious of Chris. xD
This was the only thign that I could find:
He shifts his weight across my body until he his lying between my legs
Maybe he is, or just he's?
And yes, I remember when I started how I said I'd only read like two a day so I wouldn't go through it all in a few days, but I can't resist anymore. =O
thanks, idecided that he would fall in love with Chris for a reason. I study psychology and its a fact that a high perecentage of people who were sexually abused develp feelings for their abuser. Its a sad thing really
but i thought it could help develop this more.
As always thankyou to you bothfor taking your time to read and review this!
Meevs
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Either I don't get it, or there is an accidental 'H' in is...
-JC
He's fallen in love with Chris????!!!!! OMG!!! I feel so....sad....
Great irony!!!! Very shocking yet works well!!
Just a typo........lol.
Great as always!!
Alainna
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