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Wow! This was even better than the first. A lot of people don't really understand self-harm and suicide. Don't get me wrong self-harm and suicide is not a good idea. ...

Hello, I did not find anything really wrong with your work. In my opinion it was really good. You didn't leave the reader wondering which character was which. The reader ...

First, this was a great poem. Its so sad that a lot of people experience friends that aren't really friends. This is a poem that a lot of people can ...

Wow like this is poem was amazing. It has so much meaning and power. I feel that anyone who reads this poem can definitely relate to this poem in some ...

Hello. Your poem is amazing. I really enjoyed it. Sadly there are so many people out there going through this. Anyway I feel like you maybe could have added more. ...

Hello, this is an amazing poem. It is very powerful. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this. However, while reading the poem I really felt like this ...

Hello. First I'm sorry for your lost. I'm sure your grandma is very proud of you. Your poem was super sweet and sad. You really blew me away with your ...

Okay you are like awesome!!!!!!! This poem was amazing, and your flow was great. I feel like people will be able to relate to your poem. And as a writer ...

This is an awesome poem!!!!! I really enjoy the tone and voice of the poem. It really kept me interested the entire time. I'm assuming that there is a girl ...

Okay so this was a great poem. But there were a few grammar errors. You kinda spelled Murder wrong. However, this is a well written poem, and the flow is ...

Wow!!! This is a great poem and I really enjoyed reading this. I really enjoyed the transition from childhood with a blade, to the danger it causes through self-harm. This ...

This was a great poem! I was literally in tears while reading this poem. I personally didn't find any mistakes, and if there were mistakes I didn't notice. "Up close ...

This was great. All moms need to read this poem. My mom is very strict, I know its for my good but still. Anyway, moms need to realize that their ...

I'm like in tears right now. I understand the feeling Reading the poem I could tell it was straight from the heart. Feeling like that is one horrible feeling But ...

Wow This is a great poem. I can really relate to it. My boyfriend dumped me like it was nothing, and I really cared for him But he only went ...