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Re: Dionysus pours a drink
Good morning/afternoon/evening/night, I originally clicked on this because I'm a huge fan of Greek Mythology stories, but I ended up enjoying it a lot more than I thought I would! ...
Feb 9, 2023 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
Welp, now I'm crying! I literally just wrote an entire scholarship essay about what I would like to change in the world, and this is the exact topic I wrote ...
Nov 5, 2022 -
Re: When Is A War Not A War?
Good morning/afternoon/night bnnina, Great job for this being your first poem! It carries such a powerful message, especially for someone who's Jewish and grew up hearing stories about the Holocaust. ...
Oct 15, 2022 -
Re: Movie Recs
Hi anne27, Great job! I really like how relatable this poem is! I definitely have moments watching movies where this is very accurate (mostly the laughing when the villain is ...
Oct 15, 2022 -
Re: pink starbursts
OMG, I don't really have any suggestions, I just wanted to say this is super beautiful! I do have a few questions if you don't mind answering them if you ...
Oct 15, 2022 -
Re: Glass of Water
Hi, Sunflowerdemon (love the username, by the way!) This is such a beautiful poem! When I saw the description, I thought it was going to talk about pessimism versus optimism, ...
Oct 15, 2022 -
Re: we are all riverbank clay (and fire hardened wood)
Hey there! This was a really interesting poem to read! I really liked all the imagery that came out of describing people like different parts of the earth. I was ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: the opposite of a daydream
I love this! I really like how you encompassed an idea that I feel like a lot of non-LGBTQ folks don't understand, which is the realization that you don't absolutely ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: Focus
Hi! This is a great poem! I found it very relatable, and I really like how it's both light-hearted and carries a deep message at the same time. The only ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: god's failed creations
Hey, so this is really interesting from both a poet's standpoint and the standpoint of someone who's religious. I absolutely love the imagery of certain lines, as well as the ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: how to begin to weave a basket
I absolutely love this! It feels very much like some old cookbooks I have from my grandma - clear directions typed with her little comments and suggestions written in between ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: Picture-(Original)
This is definitely thought-provoking! I can't say I've ever really read any philosophy poetry, so I'm not sure how much help this review will be, but I'll try my best. ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: Are you okay?
Ok so first of all wow. You just did an absolutely amazing job of putting a ton of hard-to-describe feelings into words. I really like the way you kept asking ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: feelings of music
Dear MoonIris, I know exactly how you feel. Music is my whole life, so this poem really speaks to me. I only found a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ...
Aug 14, 2020 -
Re: Pit Fall
Dear MeherazulAzim16, Hello! I really liked this poem, and the metaphor behind it of falling in love being a dark pit that you get sucked into. I do have a ...
Aug 14, 2020
