ImHero

It's not right, and I think you know that. So I'll leave that comment there but tell you that I really liked the eloquency. This is a poem that seemed ...

Hey, there's not much content or rhythm in this piece nor do I think the ambiguity is in a positive way. It seems individual words make what you are trying ...

wow, well its pleasing to hear this poem because your take on it comes out very original. How the words are versed seems to be awesome but the way I ...

Hey so vintage writer has something but personally I like 4 lines per stanza but that's totally you. The biggest thing with writing poetry is doing lines so you can ...

Hey I like this poem but I don't understand some parts. Okay well you compare saying your love is an hourglass that breaks? An hourglass symbolizes a certain amount of ...

Hey, I'm not sure what you audience is and that's going to decide whether I like this or not. Putting all grammatical errors and syntax aside I would start very ...

First off, nice poem, I'd like to offer some constructive criticism so ignore it if you disagree. Seems the theme is original but the way its written comes off as ...

I don't like this and not because you don't have the capicity to write well. Simply, I hate cliche and thats all this is. I sorta had a bias to ...

Hey so the first thing that I didn't like was the cliche term: 'to be or not to be'. I would suggest you don't use it at all. The second ...

First of all, I was reading the reviews before me so I wouldn't repeat anything over and I feel like I need to say the following. Write whatever you want ...

the heat of a hundred suns shining on your face. It's the pressure of a thousand tons against your heart, It tells you to rise higher than the clouds, Just ...

YAYYY, my specialty ! A heroic.. poem? :) 1. I would say that this 'poem' is questionable at being a poem. The two bare bone minimum things in a poem ...

I like it, not a bunch to it. It would be a very short song. I would like to see if you actually made it longer, what it would look ...

Hey, was not expecting that good of an ending ! I really liked the part about the dreams, in a way you can kindof analyze it, through medafores, and that's ...

Hey, well I don't really think you should continue with this to be honest. If you have an idea to add some originality then yes. At this moment, this story ...