Ignatius5453

Awesome job. Sooooooooooo relatable.

I liked the format, it was easy to read and flowed well. Not a bad idea, might have started a new form of porety; the sonnet, the haiku, the free-verse, ...

I took one look t the poem and decided it was too daunting to read, maybe split it up into stanzas that would be so much easier on the eyes, ...

It was decent, though in some places the rhythm was totally off, but not at all a bad effort, I honestly enjoyed it, and will probably re-read it a few ...

Great job, I would give a review and nit-pick, but that has already been done. Any-whoooo, great job, again.

It was awesome, like honestly awesome. I have absolutely no complaints or comments to make on it, so all I can say is just to keep up the good work ...

Punctuation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Needs more, oh, and just because it's poetry doesn't mean every first letter needs to be capitalized; it follows the punctuation. But, otherwise, this was an awesome poem. N

This was so unique it was perfect. The only error you made that I caught was you put a 'got' where there should be a go. But I loved it ...

It was so well done. I don't have any criticisms to offer. It was brilliant as all hell. I mean I don't think there's any other word to describe it ...

Hey you had the triple crown of poetry: A good rhyme scheme (and you followed it), good punctuation, and correct capitalization. And the poem itself was marvelous, it was amazing, ...

I liked the title, very inventive and creative, and your punctuation was acceptable, better than many on YWS, and the poem was good, I liked the imagery and vivid pictures ...

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It seems people have already given you the long reviews that point out what you've done extremely horribly wrong and/or extremely wonderfully right, so I'll just compliment you and say, ...

Well, I guess it is kind of formless and shapeless, and rhythm-less, and you probably can't even call it a poem, and there are a long litany of things wrong ...

What a cute poem, I was very tempted to go "awhhhhh" out loud. Very well done, the content, flow, wording, it was a genuine good poem. Congrats, I loved it. ...