ILUVBUNNIES08

Hey, ILUVBUNNIES08 here for a review! First off, I love this title it caught my eye while I was scrolling through the shorts page looking for something to review. Second, ...

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This was quite a good poem. Let's get right into it. a certain number of months circling round a certain individual year. "Certain individual year" doesn't fit into the text. ...

I like this poem alot it shows the pain of the narrorator sorry if i spelled that wrong. also just fyi you username is your email. i would like if ...

I just got to say wow this is so emotional and I love how you wrote about 9/11. This almost made me cry. I feel like this should be published. ...

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“Hallie!” Selene rushed to meet her maid of honor. “Have you seen the caterers?” The correct spelling of "honor" should be "honour" She tried not to think about the years ...

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I'm curious about you mentioned this being your first attempt at a novel. Is this supposed to be the first chapter? I'm definitely intrigued by the story you've set up ...

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Hey LunarGirl. I like your new profile pic. It cute. I like this poem. The descriptive imagery is nice. I don't know much about poem formatting, so I won't comment ...

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Hello. Here for a review! Although I like free verse, but I think this would have been better if it were written in a rhythm. Well, I am trying... He ...

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Definitely a unique and creative idea to place the words in a particular way that conveys the idea of a blackout. Loved the first few lines of the poem, especially ...

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I find the story interesting. It piqued my interest when I read the title. I rarely read science fiction stories because most of them seem to be too complicated for ...

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Sooooo to me this almost sounds like a knockoff version of snow white. No offense. But as I started to read it sounded less and less like snow white. You ...

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LUNAGIRL i love this. This is very romantic. I am trying to publish a poem on here called I love you my dear. Be looking for it. I love the ...

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This is beautiful. Welcome to Young Writers Society by the way. I hope you find everything you need on here. By the way if you have any questions you can ...

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Omg vil this had me crying. This was super emotional for me. Also I love the name River. That was going to be my name is I was a boy. ...

This is really good I love Greek stories and this is very good. I love how you said seaglass eyes, instead of seagreen eyes like all of the other stories ...