HowlingAtTheMoon

Hello, I'm Howl. I think that your second line would be better if you used was instead of were. I also think that in line six could is better than ...

Hi, I'm Howl. I know how all this feels, cause I've been through it. I'm still going through it but if it means anything to you, I'm hear if you ...

Hello, I'm Howl. I love the idea of this poem, but I really think that if you added more to it then it would be even better than it already ...

Hey, I'm Howl. This was truly a beautiful piece. I feel like I can relate in a way. I loved how I could picture it. I do have one question ...

Hello, I'm Howl. I think I see where this story is going and I do like the idea of it, but it could be better if you could add more ...

Hello, I'm Howl. All I can really say is wow. This was amazing how you made the kid so innocent, but it is truly sad to picture. Your description was ...

Hello, I'm Howl. I see where this poem is going but I think that you could add more to it, like add more details, some lines seem like they would ...

Hello, I'm Howl. This was actually really clever, the way you brought in the hurricane idea was great, though, I don't think that the word serendipity should be used in ...

I understand where you are coming from, and I did like this piece. It's a start for letting people know how suicidal people think, which would change a lot of ...

This story was really in my opinion. I do think that maybe instead the title should be the 'The Sky Princess' instead of the "The Sky Girl", but that is ...

This is a really good poem that seems well thought out. I do have one thing that I don't really like; "Heads would roll like chicken" it doesn't fit with ...

To me this is a good poem, the way your words actually created images that I could picture inside of my head. The way your words described the feelings that ...

Hi, I'm Howl. This was a really good poem, though I don't really get the part "The matress springs of moon-lit beams". Could you explain the moon-lit beams part to ...

Hello, I'm Howl. This is a good poem with just a few errors. In stanza 1 "You left me helpless and my heart, since then, remained empty." I think that ...

Hello, I'm Howl The poem in all was really nice, but there are a few things that don't seem right. When you say: "All things must come to an end, ...