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Thanks!

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Oooohhh, are they in love? Kkachi and Nakai, sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G First comes love, then marriage, then comes officially adopting Usan!

Aw man! XD

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Hello, I hope your having a great day! I'm here to review, as always! First, I just wanna say, the opening scene was ADORABLE!! As always, you make me really ...

Yeah, that makes sense... I actually noticed that while I was working on the next chapter.

What's that? A bird? A plane? It's- It's- A review incoming! First of all, I love the flow of this poem, and the metaphors are on point! I like how ...

What's that? A bird? A plane? It's- It's- A review incoming! First of all, I love the flow of this poem, and the metaphors are on point! I like how ...

I was thinking realistic, idk, something under those lines anyway.

Thanks for the review! Did you read chapter seven? Idk, just checking, I was thinking that's why it was abrupt, but you do make a point, it is abrupt either ...

Thanks for the review! :D it was very inkreduhbull!

Oh, one other thing, I'm not sure this poem falls under Teen Fiction. Idk, maybe it's just me.