Horisun

I like this poem. It has a very good theme, and I really enjoyed reading it. It's mostly grammar errors I'll point out real quick. First, "Yes people may write ...

This poem is amazing! I really enjoyed the flow, and the feeling. It's so enjoyable, and so emotional, it's just great! The only thing might just be me, but in ...

What is that? Over there? It's a review on the Horisun! :D I really enjoyed this story. From what I could tell, the grammar was fine except one line where ...

What is that? Over there? It's a review on the Horisun! This poem was really good! I love the randomness, and I finished with a smile on my face. There ...

Great chapter! I actually think this is one of my favorite chapters so far. There really wasn't much story wise I felt I needed to point out, except what Liberty ...

This is a really good poem. I think the overall flow is great, and that all the words and lines are fine. However, there are several inconsistencies in this poem. ...

Wow, wow, wow... New character! I honestly did not expect that! She seems interesting. What's her name? What's her story? Will she join forces with our heroes? Will she help ...

This was really good! I really enjoyed this. I LOVE dragons, like, LOVE them. The majority of my bedroom is dragons. So this story instantly caught my eye. So, on ...

What's that, in the distance? It's a review on the Horisun! Sorry 'bout that, people always have those kinds of intros. Anyways, I really like this poem! It's really relatable, ...

This poem was awesome! I loved the flow and the rhymes! (I LOVE poems that rhyme) this was really good. There was only one, single, tiny, grammar error at the ...

Great poem! I'm curious, did this actually happen, or did you make it up for story purposes? I really liked the figurative language, and the word choice. It was really ...

Plot Twist!!!!!!!! This chapter was great! I loved it. I especially loved the interaction between Kkachi and her friends, and I loved her interaction between her Grandma and Grampa. However, ...

Great chapter! I really liked this. Oh, and I have a gut feeling that she is the lost princess, btw. I really like how you are setting up the story ...

This was a really great poem. I liked the word choice, and the figurative language, and the overall poem itself. There are two things I'd like to point out, however. ...

I love this poem. The rhymes are great, and the theme is AMAZING! I'm still a kid myself, but I still love this poem. There was pretty much only one ...