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Howdy, I hope you’re having a good morning so far! Having read “Gone Astray,” there is something very bittersweet about this introduction. The paragraph divesting Tyr’s hopes for the future, ...

Hello, and belated welcome to the site! I hope you're having a good day or night thus far! I loved how you executed this chapter. Though it was heavy on ...

Hello! And Happy Social Month! I hope you're having a good day or night. I loved the worldbuilding exhibited here. There's a lot of really cool idea's that I'm super ...

Steven seems like a great guy. I think it's hilarious that well Jarid is overthinking, why is this guy being so nice to me? He must know I'm a commoner. ...

Hi there! I hope you're having a good day or night thus far! This first and second chapter remind me of the Heroes journey, (or the start of it, at ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night, and a good start to your new year! There's a lot of fun to be had with two-sentence horror stories. ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good evening so far, and happy Review Day! I really enjoy the subversion you've applied as the centerpiece to your story. This concept is ...

Hi, and happy Review Day! I hope you're having a good one so far! I really enjoyed the simplicity of this piece of flash fiction. You began with a goal ...

Hi, I hope you're having a great Review Day so far! Gosh, this poem is incredible. Your use of language here is so incredibly visceral and fits the theme of ...

Hi, and happy review day! I hope it's been a good one so far! I really enjoyed the lighthearted atmosphere you cultivated in this short story. Penelope comes across as ...

Hello, belated welcome to the site! I hope you're having a good day so far. What I found most interesting about this story was the juxtaposition between Basil's past and ...

Hi, welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're having a great evening so far. I think one thing that makes a great horror story stand out is its ...

Howdy! Back again for another review! We're starting to wind down from the major conflicts of the previous chapters. It's looking like the characters are going to back off a ...

Hi again! I hope you're having a great day or night so far! This, simply said, was a really neat chapter. What immediately caught my attention was the use of ...

Hi again! This was an awesome chapter. You used each character's abilities to full effect, creating an incredibly interesting fight sequence. Even despite all the moving parts, you managed to ...