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Re: The Fox
Hello SunsetSprite! I believe that I have reviewed your work once before, and I'd like to again! :P I really liked that this had that song 'What Does The Fox ...
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, I've come to give you a review! :-P This is a lovely piece of work, very emotional - I love the ending ( you'll find out why soon )! ...
Nov 8, 2013 -
Re: The Life Unknown {Updated} {Chapter #1}
Hello! I've come to give you a review! :-P First of all, I would like to start out by saying I love this idea of yours. It just seems so ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: The Photograph
Well hello! Care for a review? You're amazing at making Sam real, the way he moves, every little thing he does... feels so natural. That made it quite enjoyable to ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Definition of a smile
Hey! How about a review! I liked this a lot, and I love how you tricked us with the title... I clicked on this thinking I'd read a cheerful, little, ...
Oct 31, 2013 -
Re: still thinking of one :)
Hello there! How about a review? This was very interesting, I loved the purple and black eyes....just imagining it gave me goose bumps. :-P I have a few things though, ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: I Hear the voices Chapter 2
Hello there! I haven't read the first chapter, but I think I understand well enough. If however, I mention something that was explained previously... Than you know why. I like ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Like Magic
Well, hello! Care for a review? I like how realistic you managed to make this... I mean at the beginning, when you describe the way their mind wanders, and how ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Lost Chances
Hey! I really like the way you write! It's fast paced, flowing, and mostly super easy to follow. I also thought you did a great job keeping it realistic. How ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: The dawn.
Hello there! I loved the beginning, were you're talking about the stars, and how they watch over us... or, you know. It was just really cool. Now, I noticed that ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: The Rabbit Hole?
Hey! Here to review! This was definitely interesting. I like your descriptions, the ribbon in her hair, and what her face looks like while she's falling. I also enjoyed her ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: The Crooked Forest
So it continues!? I'm looking forward to that! Anyways... I'd love to review this, if you don't mind. :-P Really?! K, here it goes. I loved how her friends are ...
Oct 10, 2013 -
Re: Secret Admirer
Hi there! I haven't read the whatya-micall-ems, but I found this very, very entertaining! ( You should write more often!!! ) The thought of writing secret love poems, or anything, ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Heather
Hey! How bout a review? I loved how you laid this out, clear as daisies, from the start how it would end. In most cases, that would be frowned upon. ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Snowflake
Hello there! Would you like to hear my thoughts? OK! I really liked how you described all the different creatures, how and when they come out. The way they all ...
Sep 17, 2013
