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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1
Hello! I didn't forget! I like the part were Akia turns the bearded guy's words against him; when she says 'what are ya in for stealing cologne?' Yeah, that was ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter One: Bad Luck Outlaw: Part One {Redacted}
Hey Z! I thought I'd give you the tiniest review-type-thing, EVER. Sorry about that... but it's your own fault for being so skilled! So, good job... I like, a lot. ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 2
Hey! Sorry it took me so freaking long!! >.< This was a very insightful chapter. Well, OK... Question raising, if not the other. I found this quite easy to read, ...
Apr 8, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1
I've come. Prepare to be amazed! XD Anyway, like I told you earlier, I feel that this is a very strong first chapter. There wasn't one flashback, heavens, I like ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: My horror leads to unexpected death
O.O I has a teddy bear... Anyways, that was beautiful, Story! XD I got scared, yes. Even though my sister was in the room, with the radio on... and it's ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: So I was bitten by a spider...
Hey! Care for a review? I loved this, truly. It's so random and hilarious! I like how you wrote... kind of in that 'guess what I did today!' way. Writing ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.1
Hi, I've come to review your story! I haven't read the first chapter, so bare with me... This was awesomely written. I loved your characters, they're fun, believable, and they're ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Quest for Valeria: Chapter 2
Hello there! I've come to review! 8) I really liked your imagery, it felt somehow crisp, and it was like I was there. I also thought that your flash backs ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Beauty and the Beast: Chapter I
Hello there! I'd like to review your work for you, if that's all right? Okay than... I love Beauty and The Beast! So I think that this is a great ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Globetrotters - Chapter 1, The Boxer
Hello! Wow, I found this very interesting, and enjoyable. I really thought their science teacher was great! Yaxley, perfect name too! Though I did find at times you kind of ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Regrets: Part 2
Hi there! I went back to read the first one, and I like where this is going! I really enjoyed this, it flowed beautifully and caught my eye right from ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: The Duck Warrior Chapter 1
Hello! Care for a review? Alright than... I love that it's ducks and weasels! Your imagery was amazing, the best was in the garden... I liked that you added fruit ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: The Truth
Hi, sorry it took me so long! This piece felt really real to me. Just the feel of the beginning gave it that, I think... He had lived with him ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: Death's Welcoming Arms
Hello there! This poem of yours was certainly very dark. I liked that you have the reader thinking that it's the girl who is the troubled one, and than it's ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: Rain
Hello! I'd like to share my thoughts with you, this day! :P I really liked how romantic this was. *blushes* I'm a bit of a sucker for things like that... ...
Nov 13, 2013
