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Re: Axylia [Chapter 01]
Hello! c: I love stories about Fae! This seems like it will be a novel full of magic and cool stuff and I'm kinda excited! You've brought up lots of ...
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: A Bad Feeling
Hey there! c: I love horror stories or stories with monsters, even though it's a bad idea for me to read them or write them 'cause they freak me out! ...
Dec 30, 2016 -
Re: delicate white
Hey there! How about a review? The stanza's I thought flowed pretty well, and this wasn't exactly your typical heart-break poem- which was cool. I mean it was, in some ...
Dec 30, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 7 (TRYCOLOUR'S P.O.V.)
Hey there! Happy Review Day!!! C: This is a pretty cool chapter. I love the light kind of atmosphere the story has, but at the same time you know that ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Duchess - Chapter Three of Shattered Crowns
Hello! Happy Review Day! You've got a pretty decent writing style, and I'm actually fairly impressed at your dialogue- it definitely feels real to me, and really gives us a ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Chicken Run 1.1
Hey, Birk! How about we knock this baby out of the Green Room? Okay, so, wow. A chicken race. This is kind of beautiful and I love it. So did ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 7
Heya Marm! Happy Review Day!!! C: You've got a cool novel going on here, from what I can see! I love the names, especially Calix and Reah! Also kudos for ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Edited)
Hey there! Care for a review this lovely Review Day? I think you have a pretty cool setting, and world going on here. It seems like you've put a lot ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Catch Me I'm Falling
Hello! How about a review? c: I love the ending where the MC is falling in slow motion. It was really cool because I was seeing it in slow motion ...
Dec 28, 2016 -
Re: Deathbound Chapter 2.2
Hey! Care for a review? I have to say, I absolutely adore this. The way each event unfolded made me giddy like a little girl. It was just so... the ...
Dec 28, 2016 -
Re: Falling Rich
Heyo! How about a review? I really liked this, actually. I felt like I really got a good sense of what Francisca was all about, and I really enjoyed her ...
Dec 25, 2016 -
Re: Untitled 02
So I thought, if he doesn't like Christmas, maybe I can give him a Hanukkah present! :P I'm rather surprised you haven't gotten more reviews... but I think the novel/chapter ...
Dec 25, 2016 -
Re: Untitled 01 (revised)
'Ello! I've finally gotten my butt over here! Like I said earlier; I like how strong the MC's voice is right off the bat. It's just really nice because then ...
Dec 14, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Four
Hello! How about we knock this baby out of the Green Room! What do ya say? I haven't read previous parts, I'm just going off of what I see in ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: an-'IR-REGULAR'-Experiance-to-remember-for-Rainy-Nights
'Ello! Care for a review this lovely morning/afternoon/evening? You have a very distinct way of writing, which I found very intriguing! Your story idea is pretty interesting and mysterious also. ...
Dec 11, 2016
