Heya Marm! Happy Review Day!!! C:
You've got a cool novel going on here, from what I can see! I love the names, especially Calix and Reah! Also kudos for naming your world (planet?) a pretty awesome name! I can NEVER seem to think of good names for worlds/cities/cultures/etc.! Dx
A feeling of weight, almost like a responsibility but not a burden.
"Weight" feels like an awkward way to describe that, to me. I get what the character means, but I feel like there's a more... positive word that could be used...? It's not a big deal, I just thought I'd mention it.
“Oh okay,” Seiko replied kind of passive-aggressively.
This is, again, sort of to do with word choice- but not really. In this story, there's a fair amount of instances where we're told what the tone of the dialogue is, but we're not shown what the tone is. If I say: "No. You can not have that." I don't need to tell you: she said sternly because you already know. So think about ways to make dialogue really convey your intentions, rather then just explaining it. How can you show in the dialogue that Seiko is passive-aggressive? Maybe something like "Mhm... Right." Also italics can be a great friend in this department because it can really indicate HOW a person is saying what they're saying- the same goes for punctuation!
Her face held a stern look and her walk was confident.
So this is kind of the same thing as what I've been talking about, only now it's not dialogue. We can show people what we mean in regular narration, the same as dialogue- well, not quite the same as dialogue.

Elijah grinned and looked at Reah, they both answered, “Yeah,” while laughing.
This felt kinda awkward to me. It's a bit cute, but the whole situation where Seiko asks if they're a thing and they answer so easily... it just doesn't seem like something that would happen naturally, to me. I mean, I get it if Seiko and Reah are close friends- teasing then, is essential

“Novah, Reah was out on an expedition with some of the scientists for a couple weeks,”
Normally, I think specialists have their own special name for themselves- like, scientist is a very broad title. Like there's Zoologists, Geologists, Archaeologists... I don't know much about titles and stuff (which is why I'm bad at naming things) but what kind of scientists are these scientists? Generally in stories like this, there's like more specific names for things, and names that we might not use very much. If that makes sense. This is actually the exact reason I don't write things in genre's like Science Fiction- because everything would be called a Lazer Gun! XP But anyway.
So one more thing. What happened in this chapter? What is this chapter contributing to the novel? Novah got up, and went to breakfast with Seiko. She was introduced to Reah and her boyfriend... but what's this chapter and information doing for the story? How's it moving the story forward? Just something to think about! Sometimes we think we have to write everything that happens in a story, but that's not the case. Follow the story~
I hope this was somewhat helpful. I'm interested in knowing what you'll do with this! Keep it up!!! ^_^
-Socks
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