Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
There is no-known way known to me on how I should evaluate what I am about to pen; my only will and aim is to publicly present a repetition of an unanswerable occurring, which I am bound to experience each night.
From start, I was noted for being extremely and meaninglessly bipolar; my transferring emotion sometimes became aggressive and that is why for which I had to pay at my young years. This particular, ‘flow of emotion’ character had developed in each stages of my growth and presently in my manhood. And as fate had decided; on that one particular night, my aggressive character took control over my soul, and for some unknown reason: I was towards the front seat of my car, and before I had realized my current motion; I had got in my car and thus was driving towards a construction-site near central road, in the streets of Dhaka city. The night clouds had rolled onto the full moon as matter of time kept passing; I could hear the breeze of the approaching storm, as well as the sound of my aggression rising. Angrily, I had pressured the accelerator, and surely I was burning the engine oil. (As earlier mentioned) fate had presented itself, as in a flash I had encountered (and ran over!) a shadow figure in-front of me. Rusty-ly, the car brake was pushed, and I finally felt my neurons gathering some presense of mind. It was ‘She’ lying there dead pale, pale enough to indicate that her soul was here no-more! I was trying hard, but barely I could’ve stayed still; I was blaming my ‘Aggressive Character’ (which possessed me) for crushing the spine of poor her and bursting and squeezing the blood out of her beautiful wedding dress. My mind became deaf, until my ‘flow of emotion’ took an opposite toll, and (losing my presense of mind again) I had gone home; leaving her.
Well...this is certainly quite the start here. Its the sort of thing that catches your attention right away here because we've got a very intriguing sort of mind game being played at the same time as some very, very vivid descriptions there and it comes together quite nicely to form something that really makes you want to find things out here.
The following day had passed in blur; and (much to my surprise) there was no news about her in the daily newspaper and in the T.V. The whole day my mind was trying to forcibly convince myself that everything that had happened was simply dreamt, and I finally had felt convinced; until every mid-night from then; that thing would posses me, and I would go to that particular place, and run over her again (and again!); only to find myself coming back home.
That's an interesting note to follow there. Its a bit of a time skip it seems which works I think because this is quite a short story and you've created just about enough emotion there at the start. It very interesting there with the way this person who then possibly went back to a less aggressive personality is trying to dismiss all this from her mind while at the same time almost knowing that this could all happen again in the blink of an eye. Its quite a powerful message there.
True! It is high time one should fancy me mad (by now), but I am more than sure of what I do each night. This thing inside me is evil, and it is punishing me for the world’s sins! She is my personal hell, and only by killing her, I sense a moment of satisfaction! Ofcourse there is nothing I can do about, EXCEPT WAIT FOR IT’S ARRIVAL TONIGHT.
Hmm that is quite the ending there. It adds almost yet another twist to this particular story here. It now almost leaves you just ever so slightly confused there since it doesn't fully seem to match up with that opening. It is however the sort of ending that leaves you with quite a bit to think about so I'd say it still does sort of work here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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