Hippyhoodrat

Wow. I could be wrong but this poem has an angry, indignant tone to me and that's why I loved it. It's like your fed up with hypocrisy or really ...

Honestly I don't even know how I'm going to review this because it was damn near perfect lol..I really enjoyed this poem. First of all, I love that you used ...

Hi! Nice job here. Just a few comments. I agree with the previous review about that very first line; putting those two adjectives didn't really flow. I think just taking ...

Nice poem. Just a few comments. First, I think you could take a more metaphorical approach with this poem. Of course, poems don't always have to sound like some kind ...

I absolutely adored this poem...first, I commend you on the whole rhyming. As you know, poetry doesn't have to rhyme but the fact that you decided to do it this ...

PICKLES! This is cute. I actually commend you for being able to write a super simple, funny poem. I, myself cant write things that aren't overly emotional so nice job ...

ok so I don't know if its the way I read it but I really enjoyed this little poem. It wasn't completely obvious what you were talking about the entire ...

I loved this. Every single line of it. I thought it was great. The only comments I have would probably be the whole structure of the poem. Id suggest maybe ...

Hi! This actually reminded me of a lot of a song while I was reading it. I kept looking at the top to see if you had mentions anything about ...

nice poem.. just a few comments. In the first stanza.. I think you meant gasping, not grasping... the second line didn't make sense to me since the hair would be ...

I LOVED this and I can most definitely relate. After the first line, I was already smiling. Its not so much that its funny, it more like its badass. I ...

wow, I really loved this so much. When I first saw the long lines and kind of big stanzas, I was a little apprehensive about what I was going to ...

ohhh love poems; my favorite. I really enjoyed this one; really powerful, really deep. From the very first line, I was sold on this. Such a beautiful line. The rhyme ...

I enjoyed this poem :) Super short but super cute. I'm ashamed to say I didn't get it the first time I read but when my brain finally came around ...

Woah. Nice work. First, I loved the structure; the way you separated your stanzas and how you placed every thing. That's the first time ive seen that on this site. ...