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HiImAndy

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Silent Beauty

    Wow this left me a tad bit speechless. It was amazing in my mind. I like dark and twisted writing and wish I could write it myself. This was definitely ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.

    I like this poem. It made me smile with remembering when I realized I love my boyfriend. My friends hate his but I love him so I can understand that. ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Awake

    Wow with such little words this goes so far. I just got through a huge rough patch in my life and this is what it reminded me. I was indeed ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: freedom in the darkness

    Let me start off with I absolutely love this. It gave me this childish feel, which is good. I'm a kid a heart for sure and reading this made me ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Say Something

    Hello, I magically stumbled upon this and even though it made me feel a little sad I thought it was amazing. It made perfect sense to me and it's a ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Mystery

    I really really liked this. When I first started reading I had no idea that it would get so intense the more I read. I kind of got a head ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard

    This is really good and well written I just have a question about one part. "and I watch the as the" Is it suppose to say "the as the"? It ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Satire Re: Skankin'

    I really like this even though it's a little confusing to me. But it's good like it runs together well and it makes sense but "skankin'" it's just I don't ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Daughter of the living God

    This is really amazing. I've never read anything about temptation that I wanted to read again and again but here I am reading this for the third time. I like ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Summer Closure

    Growing up we learn how to write grammatically correct but at a certain point they let us in on a secret. We can write poetry however we want. No rules, ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Rants of Heartbreak

    I liked this. You seem like a very strong person and it's written in your words. I thought I was in love once and after he left I finally knew ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: What She Is

    I read this twice only fully understand the words the second time. They reminded me of myself and all the pain I've caused for the one I love. We don't ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: the burden of aging

    I loved the emotion I felt while reading this. It reminded me of how I wish I would've never said I want to grow up because now that I have ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Cuddle Application 1: Truth or Dare

    Oh my gosh, I cannot describe in enough words how much I really liked this. You had me hooked from the beginning which is hard because I get distracted very ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: The Present Past

    Let me start by saying I liked this a whole lot. I know how it feels to love someone you can't be with it's a terrible pain that you feel ...

    Aug 11, 2014


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