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Re: Silent Beauty
Wow this left me a tad bit speechless. It was amazing in my mind. I like dark and twisted writing and wish I could write it myself. This was definitely ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.
I like this poem. It made me smile with remembering when I realized I love my boyfriend. My friends hate his but I love him so I can understand that. ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Awake
Wow with such little words this goes so far. I just got through a huge rough patch in my life and this is what it reminded me. I was indeed ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: freedom in the darkness
Let me start off with I absolutely love this. It gave me this childish feel, which is good. I'm a kid a heart for sure and reading this made me ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Say Something
Hello, I magically stumbled upon this and even though it made me feel a little sad I thought it was amazing. It made perfect sense to me and it's a ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Mystery
I really really liked this. When I first started reading I had no idea that it would get so intense the more I read. I kind of got a head ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard
This is really good and well written I just have a question about one part. "and I watch the as the" Is it suppose to say "the as the"? It ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Skankin'
I really like this even though it's a little confusing to me. But it's good like it runs together well and it makes sense but "skankin'" it's just I don't ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Daughter of the living God
This is really amazing. I've never read anything about temptation that I wanted to read again and again but here I am reading this for the third time. I like ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Summer Closure
Growing up we learn how to write grammatically correct but at a certain point they let us in on a secret. We can write poetry however we want. No rules, ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Rants of Heartbreak
I liked this. You seem like a very strong person and it's written in your words. I thought I was in love once and after he left I finally knew ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: What She Is
I read this twice only fully understand the words the second time. They reminded me of myself and all the pain I've caused for the one I love. We don't ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: the burden of aging
I loved the emotion I felt while reading this. It reminded me of how I wish I would've never said I want to grow up because now that I have ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Cuddle Application 1: Truth or Dare
Oh my gosh, I cannot describe in enough words how much I really liked this. You had me hooked from the beginning which is hard because I get distracted very ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: The Present Past
Let me start by saying I liked this a whole lot. I know how it feels to love someone you can't be with it's a terrible pain that you feel ...
Aug 11, 2014
