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Heya! The present tense of this work feels odd, but present tense is so difficult to do right, and I rarely ever read it, so that may be why. I'll ...

Hey there, Drac! I was wandering through the Green Room looking for something quick to review and noticed this. The concept is really interesting, and I think you've begun handling ...

Hey there! I'm not great at content-based reviews, so excuse me if this is choppy. You're an impressive wordsmith! This was beautifully written, and practically entrancing. I'm not one to ...

Heya, Nobunaga! I'm back, and this is great. I love your writing. Some quick grammatical pointers to start us off-- And everyone knew that Frights had orange teeth and red ...

Hey there! This is waaay short, and for a chapter it might be acceptable. Might, just barely. But this is labeled as a short story, and the story isn't actually ...

*presses play button* Holy hecking heck. This is great. I'm not even sure how to go about reviewing it, since I typically do grammar-heavy reviews and the grammar in this ...

Hey there, Adri! Seeing a lot of love for this piece, so I'm pretty hyped. As usual, it'll be a grammar-based review from me, with lackluster comments on the story ...

Hey there. Saw this and thought I'd drop a review! So your first paragraph is kind of... not clunky? But feels clunky? There's the mentioned of two weeks since the ...

Hey, there, bud. Told ya I'd get around to reviewing this by Monday evening, sooo-- I haven't reviewed in a long time so please excuse me if this is lackluster ...

Review time! Usually I tackle grammar stuff because I'm not sure how to review otherwise, but other than " Not the most comforting thought considering I hate marshmallows. " feeling ...

Hi, Savvyy Here as promised, and I must say, your vocabulary and use of words in this is incredible and, not to offend, surprising. I supposed I'll just jump in. ...

Hii godlypopo! To be honest, I only clicked on this story to post my previous comment (correcting 'straight jacket' >> ). I thought it would be a poem at first, ...

Ay, yo, Willard! I'm always excited to see some prose from you, and since I didn't think you'd respond to a direct message asking about the first part I'm gonna ...

Alright, alright, I'll try to review a poem of yours. I don't think I've ever reviewed a poem on here before (unless I did with an alt, before), so I'm ...

Sockieeesss> dat's wha I does. *nod nod* So I guesh we'll get started, den? cats, horses, chickens, sheep, goats, horses, cows, and other various farm creatures. You said 'horses' twice. ...