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Hey there, President! IronSpark here for a short review. First of all, I think this is really true. DeviantArt is deviant in more than one way. But I would like ...

Hey there, David! IronSpark here for a quick review. Now, I think this is a beautiful piece. I just want you to think about two things next time you sit ...

Hey there, Mia! IronSpark here for another review. Now, what I want to do here is really examine each couple of lines individually. I think this is one of your ...

Hey there, Jello! Happy to be here, reviewing your awesome poem. Due to the nature and length of the piece, I'll be keeping this rather short. I think this is ...

Hey there, Mia! IronSpark here to review your poem. This is gonna be a short one, I gotta warn you. But I'll do my best! Quickly, grammar. I'm going to ...

Hey there, Stegosaurus! IronSpark here for a quick review. First of all, sorry if what I'm saying is repetitive. I want to give you my unadulterated thoughts here, and some ...

Hey there, amieLee16! I can't wait to review this awesome piece of yours. I'll mainly be focusing on style and formatting here, if you don't mind. Ready? Set? Go! Content: ...

Hey there, Gummy! IronSpark here for a quick NaNoRevMo review. First, a quick note on formatting. Your first line is strangely separated from the others, which I think was probably ...

Hey there, Siennabrooks! It's me, Sparkles, here to review your awesome piece. Before we start, remember that I'm adhering to traditional grammar rules when I review your poem, and if ...

GREETINGS, BROTHER. I am here to review your magical story about unicorns and whatnot. I hope you find some of my comments helpful and (as always) if you have any ...

Hey there, fortis! First off, I want to apologize if there are any typos and/or mistakes in this review. I'm not used to typing on the iPad, so... I'll try ...

Hey there, prithamrittika! IronSpark here to review your awesome poem. First off, let me remind you that in this review, I'll be focusing on traditional grammatical rules. If you chose ...

Hey there, Urba! I'm here to review this magnificent poem of yours. First of all, thank you for posting this. Your devotion to and love for your country really shines ...

Hey there, ChocolateCello! Sparkles here to review your awesome poem. Just a disclaimer: I haven't read the other reviews because I'm lazy, so I apologize if I cover something they ...

Hey there, basia! Sparkles here to review your awesome poem. First, let's talk about style and phrasing. So... rhyme. Often, rhyme comes with the connotation of being childish and playful, ...