Harker

Hi, Ashkitten83! Introduction: Great job. This poem really resonated with me, as I'm sure it will with your other readers. In this review, I'll just highlight a few suggestions and ...

Hi, Lylas! I'm just going to dive into this one. Introduction: I love your work. I really, truly love your work. I've been literally thinking for hours about how to ...

Hi, Lau! (I promised that I would review this, so... :)) Ready? Set? Go! Grammar and Nitpicks: Full of Witches, dragons, elves, hobbits, yellow brick roads, dancing trees and so ...

Great job, ishitadutt! (I can't wait to review this one... :)) Let's do this line by line! It was a usual Sunday morning and I had my Maths class test ...

Hi, EccentricRose! I'm no expert in lyric-writing (and I'm about as musical as my dog) so instead of giving you suggestions on how to improve your piece, I just want ...

Hi again, ishitadutt! I'm just going to jump right in. This is fairly short, so I'm going to do it line by line. Okay? Okay, let's do this! :D It ...

Hi there, Nightcrawler. Introduction: To begin with, I just want to say how much I love this poem. Your writing manages to be simultaneously rhythmic, eloquent, and raw. In this ...

Hi there, ishitadutt! Introduction: This is great. Really! Your use of repetition makes your writing alluring, you include some excellent phrases, and you have a nice structure. Because of this, ...

Hi, Arkhaion! First, a disclaimer: Since I first started reviewing, I've mostly stuck to reviewing poetry. This is one of my first times working with prose on YWS, so this ...

Hi there, Falconer! Introduction: Wow, your writing is amazing. Your grammar is near spotless, your phrasing is great, and your structure is clear and succinct. You have barely anything to ...

Hi there, Deathwave1! (Bit of a morbid username, by the way. Just my type. ;)) Introduction: Wow. Really. Wow. You have an innate sense of timing, excellent line breaks, and ...

Hi there, Sunshine1113! I hope you don't mind being my guinea pig. I'm trying out a new poetry review format, so there may be a few repetitive/confusing bits in here. ...

Hi, Matthew! I have to say... this is a beautiful, well structured story. The phrase, "We all shouted Terrorist. We all hated them." has great cadence. All in all, your ...

*blinks* Um... I guess I'm, um, reviewing this. I think? Maybe. Anyway, I have three comments: 1. End of line 3, stanza 1 and end of line 2, stanza 1: ...

Hi, Divya! This is a great poem, structurally and idea-wise. It's so great, actually, that I'm gonna have to nitpick a bit. Is that okay? :P Title: Mother, My Goddess ...