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Hey, Roxy! I'm just gonna go through with a few suggestions. You obviously know how to put a sentence together. You write solidly on that level, and you know how ...

Hey there, ariana! So. I know that lyrics are different from poems in that they're meant for more popular consumption and are heard rather than read over and over. Because ...

Hey there! I want to say first of that I'm really impressed with the quality of the rhymes here. Not once did I feel a hint of Dr. Seuss, throwing ...

Hey, ERZA. Thanks for taking the time to explore this topic. It's kind of like that effect where you read about someone breathing, you suddenly become aware of your own ...

Oh no! Reading this poem, I got really frustrated, because I just wanted to hear your fantastic poem ideas. You said you have so many, and you tempted me to ...

This is fantastic and I applaud you for having the strength to bring it up out of your feeling and turn it into speaking and writing. I love especially this ...

Hey, Tigg. Congratulations on the award! This is a pretty tight piece, so it's no wonder you were recognized. In light of that, I'm just going to take this review ...

haha, oh my gosh, there are a lot of Shadows in this poem, aren't there? So, I am really intrigued by this idea of taking what is supposed to be ...

Ahhh, nooo~ Why did you use rhyme in this poem? I was sinking comfortably into your poem, loving the imagery I was getting, but then the first rhyme hit and ...

Hey, Audy. I feel like you might have posted a version of this before? Anyway, you need to be aware that there's a major tone shift after the first acrostic. ...

Oh my god! This is great! You really hit on some original phrasings of grief and anger in this poem, and I am so happy to read them. I'll pick ...

This is great, and I congratulate you on taking a step out of the rhyme scheme. How did you feel? Did it free you up? You obviously seem to have ...

Hey, this was a nice event to play across the famous background of the Boston Bombing. I liked the reality of it: even a scary terrorist could drop their wallet ...

Oh, god, that was a strong image to start us with. I know it's not every day I think about someone licking worms fresh from the ground. Disgusting and powerful, ...

I'm so creeped out and I don't know how to feel about any of this chapter. I understand that you want to twist the pokemon story so that it's "not ...