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Hey Skinsy~ Here's the first thing I noticed: we’ll both end up screwed.” “Ooh, kinky.” Sob. I really hope there aren't anymore easy, worn out jokes like this in the ...

So, is this like Hunger Games, but they have to survive for a year? And if there's such a long span of time, why do they have to kill each ...

Hey there, Imaginator. Nice job hopping into poetry. Be sure to read some from your fellow YWSers to get a taste for what their poetry is like. It's like a ...

The most powerful element of this is the closing refrain. And I have no idea what it's referring to. First of all, I am so glad you've written this poem. ...

Okay, I want to start out with something good, so I will say that the movement of your character is crystal clear and I can follow her all the way ...

Audy, the bookends of this poem are flawless. I love the attitude that's been absorbed into every corner of those two stanzas. I love the energy throughout all of this. ...

Oh my goodness gracious there was so much going on in this chapter. But the first thing I want to point out is this: She with an ecchi look. This ...

Ooh, an interesting new character is the highlight of this new chapter for me. I like that Alexander seems to have a mysterious purpose for being in Ryan's story, and ...

Hey, ariana. Loving the easy rhyme and rhythm you have going. I'm always pleased to see when that's pulled off well. BUT! But and this is a big but. All ...

Hey, Yazi. I was super impressed with the tightness and naturalness of the rhyme and rhythm in this piece. There were just a few places where the meter was off, ...

Hey, KittyBee. I saw you requested a review on this, so I am here! I love the strong, intense, clear image you opened with. I love that you built a ...

Oh my gosh, I can't even begin to imagine how you would go about trying to tackle a project like this. Just thinking about trying to do this makes my ...

Oh, this is lovely. I bet if I were you and I saw that dragonfly get inside among those big machines, I'd want to write poetry about it, too. I ...

Those questions are really powerful, and it's a lovely way to end this piece. I think this is a hard piece to tackle, whether or not this was a true ...

And here we are, Dark, for your last review besides part 9 and 10~ I hope these have all been helpful for you. It's been fun getting to know your ...