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Jordin, I have to say I'm impressed by how much I like the rhyme in this piece. It just keeps on hitting me, and the sound of the word you ...

Ooh, I am really intrigued as to what the heck is going on in this poem. I like that your rhymes are pretty good for the most part. If you ...

Oh, I hope this is not trying to be a poem about a woman dressed up for a night out, because that would really make me mad. The problem is ...

I feel like this poem could be relevant to me, but it didn't go far enough into accusing me. Like, I love that you chose, instead of romanticizing naivety, to ...

Ooh, windy. This has a lot of biting and electric phrasing to it. I'm glad to read it! Here are lines that I think shock and evoke the most: Night ...

Hmmm. I want to like this poem, because I think you write with good clarity, but there is a lot that bothers me and I think it needs some careful ...

Hey, rbt! I really hope this isn't an embarrassing or upsetting question, but does English happen to not be your first language? I had a really hard time following the ...

Ooh, I'm happy with the main message of this song. So many stories and poems seem to cry, "But why DIDN'T you pick me?!" and it gets tiring to keep ...

Ooh. That was a twist ending I didn't expect! So, for the positive. I loved the colors in this. You brought out the colors of the audience, the red, and ...

Okay, Jenni. You have a heck of a lot going on in this little poem. It feels to me like a quilt with squares of all different sizes and textures ...

Okay! I don't want to start out with anything negative, because I honestly appreciate the effort and time you took into weaving your thoughts into a poem, so I will ...

Hey, Adna. I'm just dropping through to leave some comments on these poems. 1. The beacon once shone on a mile high cliff and the tide was slower than watching ...

"Cameron, what is wrong with you? Why have you been acting so strange for the past few days? You have Casey worried." Mariah pleaded, one hand trying to unlock the ...

June, thank you so much for putting this into words. It certainly took bravery and emotion to find what you felt was the right way to say this, or at ...

Hey, fellow Fire Flower. I am here as you requested, and I want to say I like the image you open this poem with. The colors and textures of fur ...