Hannah

Hello! I'll leave a quick review on what I felt while reading your poem. First, I am definitely into the basic premise of this poem. You want me to feel ...

I am 100 percent with you until "transparent works of art', because after that, you suddenly turn from the speaker telling the sister a story, to the sister somehow knowing ...

do robots c color do they know suns shine thru nights only we don't @ em This is my favorite part. I love the palette, and I love how in ...

It feels like there are two worlds here that you are teetering between. There is the simple, campy ode to an actual potato, where you'd use even more simple vocabulary ...

I really love the introduction of this poem. It pulls me in from the very first line -- I have subconsciously thought of myself this way, but never phrased it ...

I am really impressed with the last two lines of this poem. The second to last line is what we hope with all poems. That we have all felt the ...

I understand how this exercise can definitely make you feel good. You finally get to say what you long to say to these people, bluntly and honestly, without worrying about ...

I get a really suffocating image from this poem. I see a person laying on their bed with headphones in, taking one headphone out to check that you can't hear ...

Hi, there! That was a twist ending I wasn't expecting! I would like to comment on the piece without the ending and then on the piece with the ending. First ...

It was an interesting experience to read this poem based on my own knowledge before searching for what the title referenced and then see how the poem felt different for ...

Hi, Sheyren! Let's give back some of the great reviews you've been spreading around! I love the slow opening into this scene. I can imagine her looking through the books ...

DragonNoir, hey! I thought I'd stop by and review what you've published. First of all, this phrase was kind of jarring to have in the opening: This pain. A very ...

Hey there, Dest. I've seen you all over review in the Green Room, so I wanted to give some love back to you! I am just hopping in in the ...

Hey there, Pernicus! Here for a quick review of a horror story, yessir! I'm sorry to be picky from the first line, but I guess I have some high expectations, ...

Cas, there y'are! This has a quiet, calm moment of emotion hidden in it. When I hear the word Scotch, I think "aw, man, another wishing for my ex poem", ...