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  • Other » Humor, Theatre Re: Minor Mishaps

    This script was...something. I actually like it because of its simplicity and good-naturedness of it. Although there were a few nitty-gritty and nitpicking areas where I was confused, overall, I ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Realistic Re: Want A Laugh? Read My Poem.! :)

    It's a super succinct poem with a heartwarming theme of friendship. It appears friendly and lighthearted, yet the content of each stanza highlights vulnerabilities and personal information. Despite th

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Chickens Re: chickens will eat chicken nuggets without batting an eye

    I'm utterly speechless at this poem about chickens. At first, because it was in the category of humor, I thought it was going to be lighthearted and funny, but... boy ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: i exist but im considered useless

    Interpretations/Comments (Only Stanzas 1 and 2): Line 1 (Surrounding ocean with a pale gray sky) - The immediate usage of "ocean" and "pale gray sky" feels like a symbolization of ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: People Like Us

    Interpretations: "Lost people like us Don’t find homes We find thorns" Homes and thorns could represent numerous of things like the concept of love and hate where love is homes ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Culture Re: Why Do we...?

    Interpretations: First of all, the title - "Why Do we...?" Broad discussion question starter that I think we all ask ourselves at one point or another. Understandable placement of culture ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Theatre Re: Fear and soul

    This is one of my interpretation of how this literacy would look if it was in the format of a poem/verse or not compacted together as a paragraph: Fear, will ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » General, Lyrical Re: Red Mark On Your Cheek

    On a very basic level and overall aspect, this song reminds me of my 11-13 year old phase of songwriting based on a familiar but not-so similar experience that "someone ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The Smashed Man Meets the Smiling Man — A Crossover Story

    The simplicity of this scene is quite pleasant and easily digestible despite the content itself and what is actually happening or what will happen. Even though this is a short ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Your Disguise, My Demise

    I think the title goes well with the intention you're trying to convey here in your lyrical work. According to Google, disguise as a verb means to "give (someone or ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Theatre, Dramatic Re: Here and Now

    It's an intriguing short lyrical poem which you must've thought of a genius concept/idea and tried to write about it, but it is you who can only comprehend this succinct ...

    Jan 16, 2023


Why does the Air Force need expensive new bombers? Have the people we've been bombing over the years been complaining?
— George Wallace