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Halfbloodcheetah

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: you left a bitter taste on my tongue

    Hello! HBC speeding by for a review! My first impression of this poem is that someone hurt the person in this poem, and the person who did the hurting is ...

    Aug 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: L'autre Endroit

    Okay, so before I start, I looked further down to see if I could iron one thing out. And I found it, so thank you for clarifying Harry was trans. ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sonnet 1

    Hello there! HBC here for a review! First, Thank you for the notes at the bottom. Helps me understand the meaning of the poem! This poem really shows how much ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom has reached its peak.

    HBC here for a review! How are you today? This poem is very sad, to be honest. But it is true... Again, very sad. The way that all of these ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Warning Signs

    Hey there! HBC racing by with a review. Wow! This was a good one. Is the speaker in this poem dead? And talking about how he died? By ignoring the ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: (DISCONTINUED) Friends Forever [Prologue]

    Hello there! My name is HBC and I am here to review your work. Now I love lots of things, but waaaaay near the top of that list is mysteries. ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Vanilla

    Ah! Good day! My name is HBC and I am your reviewer tonight! This poem is interesting. I came into this poem slightly confused so as you read this, know ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Likes Girls

    This story. Okay so HBC jumpin right in on this review. This boy must really, really like Candace. He realized she wasn't as happy as she could be in a ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: LIFE-full song

    HBCScribbles speeding by for a review! *tips hat* Howdy! I love music, and I love positivity. And as I first glanced at your work, I saw how positive it was. ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Luke

    I saw the name of this poem and was like "OH HELL YEAH!!!!" Luke is like one of my favorite characters!!! Okay, so a review time! I love how it ...

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Beckendorf

    This poem is giving me feels, legit feels. O_O I loved Beckendorf's character in the Percy Jackson books. I really love the stanza of how he was the son of ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Road of Life

    Oh my... Another poem about hurt and rejection... I really like poems like this because its a way to see inside the heart of a writer. This is clearly a ...

    Nov 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What Kind? (rewrite)

    First of all, this is a very strong poem with some strong words in it that really drive the feeling of the poem into the reader as they began to ...

    Nov 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: dayzed & confused & starving

    Okay, I only just glanced at this at the beginning and I can tell this is going to be a very interesting poem. Its a little hard for me to ...

    Nov 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Dog

    Okay let me say, I love animals. Especially doggies! ^-^ I can easily tell just by reading that you really love Emily. I am guessing this was a very fun ...

    Nov 17, 2016


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