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Re: you left a bitter taste on my tongue
Hello! HBC speeding by for a review! My first impression of this poem is that someone hurt the person in this poem, and the person who did the hurting is ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: L'autre Endroit
Okay, so before I start, I looked further down to see if I could iron one thing out. And I found it, so thank you for clarifying Harry was trans. ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: Sonnet 1
Hello there! HBC here for a review! First, Thank you for the notes at the bottom. Helps me understand the meaning of the poem! This poem really shows how much ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: Freedom has reached its peak.
HBC here for a review! How are you today? This poem is very sad, to be honest. But it is true... Again, very sad. The way that all of these ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: Warning Signs
Hey there! HBC racing by with a review. Wow! This was a good one. Is the speaker in this poem dead? And talking about how he died? By ignoring the ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: (DISCONTINUED) Friends Forever [Prologue]
Hello there! My name is HBC and I am here to review your work. Now I love lots of things, but waaaaay near the top of that list is mysteries. ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: Vanilla
Ah! Good day! My name is HBC and I am your reviewer tonight! This poem is interesting. I came into this poem slightly confused so as you read this, know ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: She Likes Girls
This story. Okay so HBC jumpin right in on this review. This boy must really, really like Candace. He realized she wasn't as happy as she could be in a ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: LIFE-full song
HBCScribbles speeding by for a review! *tips hat* Howdy! I love music, and I love positivity. And as I first glanced at your work, I saw how positive it was. ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: Luke
I saw the name of this poem and was like "OH HELL YEAH!!!!" Luke is like one of my favorite characters!!! Okay, so a review time! I love how it ...
Dec 18, 2016 -
Re: Beckendorf
This poem is giving me feels, legit feels. O_O I loved Beckendorf's character in the Percy Jackson books. I really love the stanza of how he was the son of ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: The Road of Life
Oh my... Another poem about hurt and rejection... I really like poems like this because its a way to see inside the heart of a writer. This is clearly a ...
Nov 26, 2016 -
Re: What Kind? (rewrite)
First of all, this is a very strong poem with some strong words in it that really drive the feeling of the poem into the reader as they began to ...
Nov 26, 2016 -
Re: dayzed & confused & starving
Okay, I only just glanced at this at the beginning and I can tell this is going to be a very interesting poem. Its a little hard for me to ...
Nov 26, 2016 -
Re: My Dog
Okay let me say, I love animals. Especially doggies! ^-^ I can easily tell just by reading that you really love Emily. I am guessing this was a very fun ...
Nov 17, 2016
